Land Locked-Keith Log

i was quite surpriced by the story ^w^

It have good visual and a good story :3

very intriging. Its amazing ^w^ And I hope this progres to the next story :3🐰

damn, this game seriously left me with a very good impression for a demo, a really pleasant surprise to see so much interesting content, but if there is something I must highlight is the great focus on the story, since normally other VNs of this type do not usually focus on the story as strongly (since they are normally like, "hahahaha furry get fatter and chubbier go brrr") but in this one I felt that they made a good mix of that with a story and depth, which in the end left me wanting more, even with more expectations of what the other characters will be like or even how the story will develop (for now I have the theory that when we move on to the "main act" of the VN we will see it from the captain's perspective, although since it says it will be a linear VN I don't know if we will have those kinds of options, or if we will rather just be spectators of the characters' stories), but it also makes me really want to see how much of the "weight gain" aspect we will see in this VN, whether that we see the main characters get fatter than they are or other secondary characters of lesser weight become fatter (for example, I half expected Camille, when he started super filling out Keith in his dream, to also start gaining weight, but seeing the area in which he works I would not be surprised if it happens in the future, after all as they say, never trust a skinny chef, or a muscular one in this case), but if there is something that I think could be improved a bit is the UI of the text box, since it feels very small sometimes, making the text difficult to read since it has to be compressed to fit in the UI of the text box, so I think it would be good to make it a bit wider so that the text does not feel very compressed and have more space to be easier to read, there is also something that is not so much a problem but I feel that it would be a good option, which would be that we could hide the UI to see the background images better, since the art is so good that it would be brutal to appreciate it better (although of course, the best thing that could fix that would be to add a gallery, but from what I've seen in other VNs, that's not that easy, so the option to hide the UI could be the best option, you could even also add a time where the image is shown without the UI of the text box, in order to appreciate the image and then continue with the story), but those are really just minor problems that don't affect that much the great hype I have for this project, I can't wait to hear more of this super interesting story :3